Good work Carlos! I like how you thought about using the torch to scare off the Patupaiarehe as they are scared of the sun. To make your work BTB you could add in some punctuation like full stops and speech marks. Keep up the amazing work!
Nice job Carlos. I liked your alternative solution to the ending of the story. But maybe next time a little more detail or more that one option could be interesting. Keep up the good work. Sharron
Good work Carlos! I like how you thought about using the torch to scare off the Patupaiarehe as they are scared of the sun. To make your work BTB you could add in some punctuation like full stops and speech marks.
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Nice job Carlos. I liked your alternative solution to the ending of the story. But maybe next time a little more detail or more that one option could be interesting. Keep up the good work. Sharron
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