You have included some interesting information about yourself but I would like you to include more detail. For example, what sort of things do you like to write, or write about? Which are your favourite video games, and what do you like about them? Also - just a tip, your speech bubbles are quite hard to read so it would be great if you could make them bigger next time.
Hi Carlos,
ReplyDeleteYou have included some interesting information about yourself but I would like you to include more detail. For example, what sort of things do you like to write, or write about? Which are your favourite video games, and what do you like about them? Also - just a tip, your speech bubbles are quite hard to read so it would be great if you could make them bigger next time.
:)
Miss H