Thursday, 23 April 2020

Lake Kaniere

                                                       Lake Kaniere           


We arrived at lake Kaniere Me and my siblings run straight into the water then we go for a swim. Then we run over to the dock and run jump off of it and later we went on the canoes to the islands. Then I saw two of my friends there and then we went on the island when walking all the way to the end of the Rock. Then we went back and got some chips to eat and then we went to the dock to jump off and swam to the iland but me and Frazer swam back from the iland and Angus went back in a canoe and me and Frazer chased a duck in the water and the duck got away.

4 comments:

  1. Great writing Carlos! It sounds like you have wonderful memories of Lake Kaniere! How long does it take you to swim back from the island? Is it very far?

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    1. yes it is very far to swim to the ilands

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  2. Hi Carlos, I liked how much detail you put in your story. I think Lake Kaniere is a pretty lake. Is the water cold to swim in? How often do you go there? It's great you have somewhere nice and fun to go to so close to home. I'm glad you get to catch up with your friends there. Keep up the good work. Sharron

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  3. I love it there too Carlos and was happy the duck got away! Have you been to any other places with Angus and Fraser?

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.